Critique examples

Real proposal critique examples, without exposing the drafts.

Browse public proposal examples run through ProposalDesk's critique engine. Each page shows structural results only: grade, estimated leak, axis scores, benchmark context, and the fixes a freelancer should make before sending.

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5 public share cardsGrade, leak, benchmark, and fix direction without exposing the underlying proposal text.
Corpus sourcePublic-route seeded
Privacy stanceNo raw draft text
Proof artifactReal share cards

Example critiques

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Web Design
D

Web design proposal critique example

A public web design proposal example scored D overall. The critique shows solid opening and scope structure, but pricing confidence and polish still create visible pre-send risk.

$1,250 leak1,886 words
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SEO Consulting
C

SEO proposal critique example

A public SEO proposal example scored C overall. The structure is readable, but the pricing and closing path need more commitment before the draft is ready to send.

$1,400 leak446 words
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Brand Strategy
C

Branding proposal critique example

A public brand strategy proposal example scored C overall. The critique shows a clean structure, but the buyer still needs stronger commercial clarity before approving.

$1,800 leak577 words
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Software Development
C

Software development proposal critique example

A public software development proposal example scored C overall. The critique shows that pricing, close, and polish all need tightening before the buyer sees the draft.

$1,850 leak1,666 words
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Digital Marketing Consulting
C

Marketing proposal critique example

A public digital marketing proposal example scored C overall with the highest leak in this examples set. Scope and pricing need stronger boundaries before sending.

$2,200 leak651 words
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