Free proposal silence diagnosis

Proposal went quiet on you?

Paste the redacted proposal that went silent. ProposalDesk grades the words you pasted and flags the weak hook, vague scope, and soft close that may be leaking replies — so you know what to tighten before you chase it again.

Diagnose the silence See proof examples

Free, anonymous critique. No signup. We only critique the words you paste. Raw proposal text is not shown on share cards.

What it checks
Weak first impressionVague scope boundariesSoft, no-urgency closeMissing next stepReply-killing risks
Built on the same Close-Ready Framework as the public critique examples.

Pick the moment

The page does not guess what happened.

These are just common reasons a proposal goes quiet. The engine only critiques the proposal text you paste.

Viewed, no reply

You believe they read it, but the thread went silent. Audit the words before you nudge.

Weak first impression

The opener may bury the value. Check whether the first lines earn the rest of the read.

Vague scope

Open-ended deliverables invite hesitation. See where the scope stops being concrete.

Soft close

A polite fade-out gives no reason to reply now. Find out if the close asks for a real next step.

What you get

A free diagnosis before you chase it.

This is not a template library, CRM, or magic follow-up spam. It is a structural critique of the proposal text that may be making the next reply harder.

Free critique

Get a grade, estimated leak, five review-lens scores, and a first-impression preview.

Shareable proof

Save or email yourself the public share card. Raw proposal text is not shown there.

Fix path

If the critique finds issues, generate a Fix Pack and decide whether to keep working in ProposalDesk.

Run the diagnosis

Paste the quiet proposal. Get the same result flow as critique.

The result stays reusable: grade, leak estimate, review-lens breakdown, share card, email capture, buyer objections, and Fix Pack when issues are found.

Paste the openerThe first few lines the client read, plus the context that frames the deal.
Paste the scope and pricingDeliverables, timeline, revision terms, and how the price was framed.
Redact private detailsRemove client names, emails, links, exact private numbers, and confidential facts.
Remove names, client details, links, emails, and private numbers before submitting.
0 / 20,000 chars Raw text is not stored - only anonymized grades.

Proof library

Check the critique proof before you paste.

Critique examples

See real critique examples

Browse safe structural examples by proposal type: grade, leak, lens scores, benchmark context, and fix direction.

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Open a real share card

See a public critique result with the grade, estimated leak, review lens scores, and benchmark context. No source proposal text is exposed.

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More rescue checks

Follow-up review

About to send another follow-up?

Paste the nudge with the proposal they saw before you send it. Check whether it restarts the deal or reads as soft, generic, and easy to ignore.

Review my follow-up ->Discount pushback

Client asked for a discount?

Check whether the proposal anchored value, proof, and pricing — or left the number exposed to the first pushback.

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