Viewed, no reply
You believe they saw it, but the thread went quiet. Audit the words before you nudge.
Free ghosted proposal rescue
Client saw your proposal and went quiet?
Paste the redacted proposal or follow-up that stalled. ProposalDesk grades the words you pasted, flags reply-killing risks, and shows what to tighten before you nudge again.
Free, anonymous critique. No signup. We only critique the words you paste. Raw proposal text is not shown on share cards.
What it checks
Weak first impressionVague scope boundariesPricing hesitationMissing next stepGeneric follow-up
Pick the moment
The page does not guess what happened.
These are just common ghosted-proposal situations. The engine only critiques the proposal or follow-up text you paste.
Sent, no response
You sent the proposal and need to know if the opener, scope, or close is weakening urgency.
Asked for discount
They pushed back on price. Check whether the proposal made value and proof specific enough.
Follow-up ignored
Your nudge did not restart the deal. Diagnose whether the next step was too soft.
What you get
A free diagnosis before another follow-up.
This is not a template library, CRM, or magic follow-up spam. It is a structural critique of the proposal text that may be making the next reply harder.
Free critique
Get a grade, estimated leak, five review-lens scores, and a first-impression preview.
Shareable proof
Save or email yourself the public share card. Raw proposal text is not shown there.
Fix path
If the critique finds issues, generate a Fix Pack and decide whether to keep working in ProposalDesk.
Run the rescue check
Paste the stalled proposal. Get the same result flow as critique.
The result stays reusable: grade, leak estimate, review-lens breakdown, share card, email capture, buyer objections, and Fix Pack when issues are found.
Proof library
Check the critique proof before you paste.
Critique examples
See real critique examples
Browse safe structural examples by proposal type: grade, leak, lens scores, benchmark context, and fix direction.
Open proof library ->Sample critiqueOpen a real share card
See a public critique result with the grade, estimated leak, review lens scores, and benchmark context. No source proposal text is exposed.
See sample critique ->More rescue checks
Pinpoint the exact moment your deal stalled.
Proposal went quiet
Proposal went quiet?
Diagnose the weak hook, vague scope, or soft close that may be why the thread stalled — before you chase it again.
Diagnose the silence ->Follow-up reviewAbout to send another follow-up?
Paste the nudge with the proposal they saw before you send it. Check whether it restarts the deal or reads as soft, generic, and easy to ignore.
Review my follow-up ->Discount pushbackClient asked for a discount?
Check whether the proposal anchored value, proof, and pricing — or left the number exposed to the first pushback.
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