C
Estimated leak$1,800The Close-Ready Framework · 39 detectors across 5 review lenses.
54%Better than
This leak is lower than 54% of all recent proposals, but there's still money on the table.Snapshot from when this critique was generated.
AHook Auditor
AScope Auditor
CPricing Inspector
BClose Coach
APolish Sentinel
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ProposalDesk graded this draft C, estimated $1,800 at risk, checks benchmark context when available, and flags the scope, pricing, closing, and polish issues that weaken a proposal before it lands in the buyer's inbox.
Scope riskUnbounded revisions, vague deliverables, and soft timelines.
Pricing gapsSoft numbers, missing deposit terms, and unclear acceptance.
Weak closePassive next steps that slow a buyer's decision.
PolishTemplate residue, generic phrasing, and low-trust padding.
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