C
Estimated leak$1,850The Close-Ready Framework · 39 detectors across 5 review lenses.
81%Better than
This proposal is in the top quartile — better than 81% of all recent proposals graded in the last 30 days.Snapshot from when this critique was generated.
AHook Auditor
AScope Auditor
CPricing Inspector
CClose Coach
CPolish Sentinel
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ProposalDesk graded this draft C, estimated $1,850 at risk, checks benchmark context when available, and flags the scope, pricing, closing, and polish issues that weaken a proposal before it lands in the buyer's inbox.
Scope riskUnbounded revisions, vague deliverables, and soft timelines.
Pricing gapsSoft numbers, missing deposit terms, and unclear acceptance.
Weak closePassive next steps that slow a buyer's decision.
PolishTemplate residue, generic phrasing, and low-trust padding.
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